My dreams and family
Will remain my priority
So never ask me ever to
Choose in between them and you.
Of course, if my love
Will be true for you,
I’ll sacrifice everything
Just to satisfy you.
Of course, if you’ll have my heart
I’ll give up my dreams
To fulfill one of yours.
I’ll leave my job
To save yours.
I’ll abandon my precious
To buy yours.
But don’t ever let me down
I perhaps wouldn’t stand that wound.
All I need is respect and love
Is it too much to ask for?
Some time out for me
From your hectic hours,
If you’ll be able to do so.
A coffee with your love in it,
When I come home tired and low.
A quick rub on the back
As soon as I’m up with the stove.
Tender touches, kisses and hugs
Will always be strongly welcomed.
Short trips to outskirts of town,
Until our stress be succumbed.
I won’t ask for spendy presents
A card will be enough for me.
If you gift me with love,
Even death won’t be leper.
The first day of my periods
Will surely be terrible.
Neither try to cuddle with me
Nor dare to stay aloof.
This thing makes women feel sick
So try not be judgemental.
I am a lioness
Starving for love
You be the lion
Avid to love.
That’ll be all I’ll ever want.
Euphoniac☆
Wow, that’s an intense write. Very nicely written.
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Oh thnq so much, Amitav ^_^
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Welcome. 🙂
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😀 😀
Happy Poetry Day, btw :p
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It was on the 21st of March. 🙂 Wish you the same.
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😂 oh… I read a post which was uploaded 1 hr ago, so thought , u know :p belated then :p
Thnq 😉
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LOL… for us poets, everyday is Poetry day. What say?
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Haan… correct! ^_^
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Well written! 🙂
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Thnq Jahnavi ^_^
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Wow! It’s written beautifully.
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Thnx a lot, girl :*
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🙂
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Namaste
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Pranam :p
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You write so intense. I prefer to read when I am very calm. You blow my mind off 😀
Is your exams over ?
I think you have a post pending to write in the opposite gender form ?
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You think so ? Well , thnx a lot.
Naa na.. They’re still on.
Yes, how can I forget that.
You’ll find it soon ^_^
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I read few lines and I am like puh, boy I need some oxygen. Let’s mark this in fav n read in calmness.
My mind is volatile as it could be and I don’t like to be impulsive 😀
That’s nice. Keep up with your studies.
Whenever it is posted I will know 😛
I am eager.
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Oh my god. Your comments are just mind blowing. Glad to know that I can be a good poet sometimes :p
Thnq for the wishes ^_^ ♡
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Yes you do. And I am again being a reflection. So you know that you already blew my mind and hence I reflect in equal proportion in comments, that probably as you say blows your mind too.
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Ohh… I can’t stop smiling, u know.
This made my day ^_^
Pleased enough. Have a great day ahead n keep writing.
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N yes, I wanted to ask you about that poem. What to do u want to see in it ? Feelings for parents or for his beloved?
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Just as is whatever you wrote as a young girl, convert that into a young boy, probably writing to his love n putting his heart n feeling out before her.
Well if I say more then :O
Just write what u feel like, it has to be opposite.
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Oh.. okay.
I get aome clues now.
I will try my best to reach upto your expectations.
Thnx for believing in me 🙂
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Just wonderful… Wow you write so well
Keep going ✌😊
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Thnq so much😍
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My pleasure 😊
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^_^
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Hey, this was filled with deeeep emotions! I loved it, specially the last lines,
“I am a lioness
Starving for love
You be the lion
Avid to love.”
Ufff, they’re killler lines! ❤
Keep writing! And all the best for exams! ☺☺
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Awww.. thnq, Chandu❤ 😍
Glad u liked it.
You too keep writing. ❤
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Arey yaat tum mujhe Chandu Chandu bolte ho, tell me what’s your nick name nah! There should ne equality! 😂😂
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😂 naa naa.. make ur own.
Mere pass countless nick names h but saare hi embarrassing h.
Can call me Sans, if u want :p vhi izzat waala h sbse :p
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😂😂😂
Okay, Sans is cool! ❤
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Hahha…
Yeah, I think that,too.
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You nailed this. Good one.
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Thnx a lot ❤
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You are welcome Sharma.
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^_^
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Wow.!!
Nice Feelings Sanskritiji.
I Like This Lines’My dreams and family
Will remain my priority
So never ask me ever to
Choose in between them and you.
Of course, if my love
Will be true for you,
I’ll sacrifice everything
Just to satisfy you.’
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Ohh… thnq so very much.😍
Glad to know that you liked it. Thnx for reading ^_^
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Your Most Welcome Sanskritiji.
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Hehe.. ^_^
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Fair deal 🙂
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^_^
♡ thnx.
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Amazing piece. Very well drafted, sissy 😍
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Thnx a ton, Adhithya ^_^
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Wow!! you write so well.Im in love with this. 😍
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Ohh… thnq so much❤
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wonderful 🙂
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Thnq 😍
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beautiful post ….lovely poem…
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Thnx a lot.
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Nice!
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Thnq ^_^
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Intense, Awesome and a lovely read.
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Thnq 🙂
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There’s no purer love in this world than that of your parents ❤️
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Ys, I completely agree to this.
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2 days to go. Yay!!! 😀
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Hehhee… so u remember? Hehee… yeah, just 2 more. ♡
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Yep yep.. I do remember. 😀
All the best Sanskriti. 🙂
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Hehe.. thnq, Sumit;)
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This is nicee. :))
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Eee, thnq😍
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2 Days to Coffee shop huh ?
Awwlelele
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Hehhee… probably.
I guess, he has left the job . -.-
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😦
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Fb.com/ The Desi Writer if someday you get time, do visit, we need an editor there 🙂
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Oh my god! What did u say ?
Can u plz elaborate a lil. An editor, oh, for umm.. what ?
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Oh! Its no publication, just a smal page on fb, people wil surely like what you write. https://m.facebook.com/The-Desi-Writer-1531520333845373/?ref=bookmarks
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Ohh.. yeah sure. I’ll visit it and respond 😉
Thnq so much for asking ^_^
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Before I could say anything I see enormous comments here.. They have said it all.. Only thing I wanna say is wow. If this is not love then what is..?? Loved ur poem
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aww, thnx a ton. thnq for reading.
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that’s always been delightful experience when I read ur feelings written
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oh, thnq for reading my posts.
have a great day! ^_^
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Intensely quoted —
“I am a lioness
Starving for love
You be the lion
Avid to love.”
In love with these lines…
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glad to know that you liked them. thnq for reading.
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When you’ve finally found the true meaning of this life and your heart’s in the right place, you’ll be happy keeping a low profile. Blessed.
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Yes.. that is so true. ^_^
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Sanskriti, your poem is awesome. 🙂
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Thnq so much ❤
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Thnq for nominating me for this challenge. ^_^
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