This is the boy version of If I Marry You as requested by Bhanu
. I hope I met your expectations.
There shall be many
Ups and downs.
Truths uncanny,
Situations when heart would drown.
But I’ll be by your side,
Forever in the world.
I’ll make you my bride,
And cherish you like a love bird.
My mom may, at times,
Be rubbed the wrong way,
Don’t worry, she will chime,
Take her shopping somewhere away.
My dad is a gentleman.
He’ll never bother you.
Cook for him occasionally, if you can.
He’ll make a great friend, you won’t rue.
I may be annoyed, seldom.
Petty things might trouble me.
Surely it will be my job’s burden,
With you I’ll handle it bravely.
I know you love to venture.
I’ll take to you to different places
To add in life some adventure
And some time out from life’s race.
I’ll never forget to compliment you.
Oh, you’re made to be praised.
I wonder how God sculpted you,
You’re nurtured beautifully and raised.
I often doubt if it’s true,
A girl like you is every man’s want.
Thank you for filling my life with hue,
I’ll be there to hold you when you grow gaunt.
You won’t be alone
To leave your world.
You won’t be the only one who’d groan.
None of our lips, that time would be curled.
You may leave your parents
But I’ll never leave you.
My love won’t be apparent,
But I will surely marry you.
Euphoniac☆
This is so cute haha! 🙂
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Thnq ❤
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Lovely
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Thnq ❤
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Awesome!
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Thnx 😀
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I tweeted it without your permission
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Oh. Does it have my name,too ?
I mean u posted it by my name ?
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Hehehe koi problem hai? Shall I delete the tweet? Doesn’t carry your name but Euphoniac for sure.
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Oh, then that’s cool. Euphoniac is must 🙂
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And not the name? 😉
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Euphoniac is unique. Once it spreads, my name automatically will be publicised. 😉
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Oh wow, will ensure to mention your name along if I tweet your blog again.
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Hehe… hmm.. good.
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Hehehe so tell me why were you surprised and sceptical about mention of your name ?
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It is because I don’t like when people post my writings without my name. So , I therefore asked.
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Noted. Will be taken care off henceforth
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Hehee… yo.;)
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🙂
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This is soo beautiful yaar Sanskriti! Hehhe, writing from the guy’s point of view, I love it! 😍😍✌
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Ohh thnq so much, Chandu bro ♡♡
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Bro kyo bolti hai mujhe! 😂😂😂
Do I look like a guy? 😜😜😜
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😂 😂 hahaha, no. Ary, mai sbko bro bolti hu :p even I don’t know why. :p
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Haha, okay BRO! 😎
Achha hai ye! 😂😂
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😂 haha.. chlo psnd aagya aapko :p
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😂😂😂
Badiya hai!
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😂 hahaha.
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As usual.. Your poetry game is on point…
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Hehe… thnq 😍
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You’re welcome…
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^_^
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Hehhe.. thnq 😍
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Wow Sanskriti … Superb one , I am gonna share this too ( of course with proper credit given to you ) 👍👌
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Hehehe.. thnq so much ❤
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No need to say thanks …
Btw, my friends also liked your poem.
keep up the good work 👍
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Wow. M glad to know that ^_^
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❤ ❤
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Lovely ❤
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Thnq ❤
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You’re welcome 🙂
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^_^
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😉
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This is piece of you so wonderfully written..This is one of your best (as per i have read , i am sure there are many more to come)..:)
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Oh… thnq so much ❤
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🙂
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So you done it ha!
Pretty good couldn’t have been any different
It is simple as it is that inside of us there is this beautiful human who is always very caring and loving.
Life may confuse you but taking strong decisions in the time when you are delusion sad and angry must be avoided. If that done I think every couple and family will have a great time.
It’s impressive and apt. A girl makes lot of sacrifices and deserves all the affection and care, a boy is blend between the family n girl. Once the family treated her like a daughter and the girl treats them as her own family with no filter n grudges, it will overlap the families and feelings.
About your talent on poem I was sure you would do it.
You share a heart of innocence and humanity.
Preserve it and always write your poem with it, however your life is.
To the Poem
To the Innocence
To the Humanity
Cheers.
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I loved your thoughts . You should write a post similar to this.
I’m glad you liked it and thnq so much for all your compliments. This comment, it took my breath away. As soon as I saw it’s length I was like ‘OMG!’ Hehe..
Thnq so much, again .
Cheers ^_^
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I cannot summarise in few words, my inefficiency. I take lot of space. I do like to post, but I need a strong discussion only when such thoughts come out of my head. I will post though, the social dilemma category of my blog is reserved for such things. I am learning not so efficient as you, nor so naturally talented.
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Oh I see. Bt isme b compliment de diya mjhe… hahhahaa.. you toh.. lol
Take your time and keep writing.
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I don’t read internet lingo and emoticons. Also incomplete sentences.
What is you toh lol ?
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Whoa. Okay.
You didn’t undrstnd? Oh, leave it well, it’s nothing.
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No I didn’t understand. I prefer words. If you may tell I would be glad, if you think it’s nothing, you may opt to skip.
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No, it’s nothing. Forget it 🙂
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I think you should read this post and comments. Also share your views.
He! – http://wp.me/s4cX5E-he
(Because that genuineness I told u had)
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Oh, I’ll read it surely. 🙂
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Its*
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lovely sans version male…..he he….awesome as always
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Thnq so much, Anagha ❤
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beautifully written..
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Thnq ❤
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ur welcome dear:) nice blog!!! looking forward to read more of your work…
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Thnq, Mansi. 😉
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Ur welcome dear😀
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^_^
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Girl I have nominated you for an award!Congratulations! 😀😀 I have nominated you for the One lovely blog award. You have a great blog with a great flow of beautiful words! Here is the link for the same –> https://ultimatesolace.wordpress.com/2016/04/09/one-lovely-blog-2016/
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Thnq so much, Shambhavi ♡. Glad to know that u think I deserve it but mine is an award free blog now. So, u undrstnd?
But thnq for nominating me.❤
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Yes ofcourse! 🙂 Thankyou for accepting it! 🙂
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Oh, you don’t thank, please 😀
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Very nice..
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Thnq 🙂
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Thank you for sharing so subtle emotion that even science would fail to capture.. actually…
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Oh, u feel so ? Thnx a lot ❤ 😍
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I really do..
I actually wanted to thank you for sharing such a lovely letter… Though I don’t know how far it’s gonna work when it will be implemented.. especially now a days..
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Oh…
Yeah, now a days the scenario is different but… umm.. try ur best ^_^
Thnx for reading 🙂
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Try!! He he …. Okay…
Thanks..
🙂
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Welcs :p :p
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He he….
It was a treat to read…
I loved it. !!
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Oh… hehe
Thnq ❤
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keep it up !!
God bless you 🙂
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Have a great day ^_^
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Yes,
You too…and keep writing:)
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Thnq.
You too.
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i will be posting my notes directly from my diary aftr some time..but it will be a treat to read from your posts .. good luck !
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Oh.. I’ll surely read them.
Thnq ❤
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That was fantastic 😍
Just feels like to read it all over and over again ☺☺☺
Very well written ✌
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Thnq so much, Viral :p ^_^
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My pleasure ☺
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Woah!
Beautiful 😍😊
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Thnq, Prathishtha ^_^
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🙂
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Sweet! 😀
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Thnq ❤ 😍
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You’re welcome 😄
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😀
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😄
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Wow! This is so cute!
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Thnq so much, Jade.❤ 😍
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Its lovely and may be so true from a boy’s point of view! ❤
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Thnq, Shreya. ^_^
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Your welcome! 🙂
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♡♡
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I must say this is the best poem I have ever come across.Good work.
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Thnx a lot, girl.
And I’m in love with ur poems. Even I write such stuff. ^_^
Have a great time 😀
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Even your poem inspired me. 🙂
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Hehe, thnq ❤
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So sweet ! ^_^
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Thnq ❤
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That is so very sweet, subtle and lovely!!
Awesome would be an under-word for it..
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Thnq so much. ❤
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very creative … long and lovely
i got a funny idea from title of this post
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Thnx.
I would love to know :p
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This is the little funny lines.
https://sanjeetv.me/2016/06/14/mineyoursmy/
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😂 I didn’t get it.
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Tried to put math in poem… will simplify it later
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😂 and u must know that I am not a math student, by the way. Hahahhaaa… :p
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may be you are a Sanskrit then
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😂 no, I’m a science student , hahaa
.
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I wish guys do say so and love by it, not only in dreams.. 😉
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Yes, I wish that too ^_^
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Wonderful Sanskriti!
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Thnq ❤
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Pleasure 😊
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^_^
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Would u mind having a sneak peak into my blog ?? I have made an attempt to paint poetry , which seems to me a vital truth than history . One such is in store . Do have a look , if you find it to be a return to the precincts of my life .. Any suggestions or drop in , is most welcomed. Thanks!
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I would surely love to go through ur blog.
And thnq for reading my writings ❤
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Awesome combination of both versions
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❤️ I’m glad you liked them.
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Yes when I was reading female version that time I was thinking about perfect reply ,when I found that in next post I feel good “oh someone have putted his efforts ”
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Hehehee.. acha.
😋
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Haan bt male wale reply. M point by point reply hota to aur mja ata
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😁😋😂 I’ll try my best next time.
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Haan already you did best 🙏🙏
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Hehe
Thanks😁😋
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