I’m leaving them just for you
Not because I love them any less
But because I want you
To let me through my dehiscence too.
Do not question me if I ever
Transfer some capital that I earn
Into their account, I’ve lived on their’s
And prospered, it’s time they rest and
Fetch some favours from their daughter .
Do not question me if amidst the night
I call my mother
Entire life she slept beside me
I don’t want her to feel alone at all.
Let me go and live few moments
Separately with my parents too
Because before this, it wasn’t you
But they who glittered my life with hue.
Let sometimes my mom come over
At our home and cook delicacies
For me and you
Because she was the one
Who experimented new food
And earned praise and few “Good”.
Do not question me if I ever
Gift my dad a brand new car
Because every morning he gave up his sleep
To drop me safe at my school .
I’ll always be their’s
You too let them be yours,
You fell in love with their creation
Of course you’ll love and cherish their ruminations.
☆ ☆ ☆
Well I was in tears when I wrote this thinking of the future because it’s really painful to leave those who brought you in this beautiful world, especially when you are their only child.
Euphoniac☆
Fantastic write, Sanskriti. 🙂
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Thnq Amitav 😀
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Welcome. 🙂 Stay blessed
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You too 🙂
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Lajavab 😘
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Hehe, shukriya ^_^
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Hope you find your man who finds resonance with the post 🙂
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I wish that too. Thnq ^_^
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Your parents are blessed to have a girl like you..!overwhelmed☺
By reading this post I just recalls my childhood and doing crazy things with my sibling to get some nice hits on my head 😊,but still at the stage of adulthood I just love to lay beside them talking all those fairy tales in my childhood
It’s seems lil boring for you lol 😅but thanks mate for making me to look back into wonderful times with my parents
Love em💞
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I’m honoured to hear that this made you cherish those precious moments of life.
Being a single child is boring but beneficial, you get love from all and everything you desire. I don’t miss the joy of having a sibling cz my parents are like my bros and sis and best friends too.
Thnq for giving some time to my writings.❤ 😍
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Pleasure is mine…
Ultimate context of your post is
“Marry me but conditions apply”😅😅😅
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😂 hahaha, you can say that :p
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Any way happy weekend😅
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Hehe, same to you. 😉
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Bahut Khub.Nice Touching Feelings Sanskritiji.
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Thnq so much ^_^
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Welcome Sanskritiji.
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Amazing write up.
Even I’m a single child, same pinch 😉
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Thnq girl ♡
Ouch, that pinched like a pin :p
Hehe :*
Hi Five ☆
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Hi-five.
Are you on FB?
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Yes but I’ve deactivated it, I’ll be back on 28th March 😀
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Exams?!?
Okay. Will meet then 🙂
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Yeah, boards :p
For sure ^_^
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Okay 😀
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I agree, when you marry you will have to leave your home to build a new one but the gratitude towards your parents for all their sacrifices should be a lifetime and your future husband should understand that 🙂
Hope you find that guy. 🙂
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Yes, that’s actually what I mean.
Thnq so much ❤ and I wish that for you and all other girls too 😀
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Wow loved it 🙂
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Thnx hn :*
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Sanskriti , this is the first post of yours I am reading as an Author . I am really impressed by your write up . Single child or with brothers & sisters , you will be continued to be loved by your parents : Read one of my story : The Indian Love Story in my Book : Journey from Guwahati to Machhiwara . May be or may be you like not . But that’s the story which has been liked by most of the readers & bloggers who reviewed my Book .
From your post , it looks you are preparing for your finals of March , my Best Wishes to you #single child .
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Thnq so much sir for taking out time to read my blogs, I’ll surely read The Indian Love Story.
Yes, it’s my last year of school-ing, thnq for your wishes.
With love – Sanskriti #singleChild ❤ :p
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Mam , ( I wanted to use some other word for addressing you , but since you have so many followers , I refrained from using that ) , you have to get my #book from Notion Press @ Rs 200 < less than cost of Burger you eat daily when skipping your classes 🙂 I was teaching in a college where you propose to go now
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Oh, I get that now, but I just scrolled through your blog and found one Guwahati one post, it was long enough that I decided to read at night. Isn’t it the summary of your book ?
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Yup , little baby
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Okay 😀
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Baby , hope you got a chance to read my Book : Journey from Guwahati to Machhiwara : Promises are made to be broken : another story written by me
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I have my board exams from 1st March so I’m right now engrossed in studies. I’ll buy n read it after my exams. 🙂
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this is so true and touching..
I loved it 🙂
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I’m glad you liked it 😀
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Excellent! God bless.
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Thnq ❤
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So sweet
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Thnq 😍
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wonderful poem with wonderful thoughts!
very few people think this way. the earth needs more people like you 🙂
your true lover will obviously love your parents too. ❤
thanks for doing such a nice post 🙂
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Omg! Thnq so much ❤ 😍
I am ecstatic to read this, this made my day, thnx a ton ♡
Stay blessed
Regards ~ Sans 😀
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you’re always most welcome!
and best wishes to you too 🙂
love and light, Vikram.
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That’s so sweet of you ^_^
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oh! really?
though I seldom use sweeteners. lol 😀
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Hahaha, you’re funny too :p
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This is why girl child’s are so special. Thanks for sharing this.
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Thnq so much for the compliment ^_^
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My pleasure 🙂
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Truly written. . . લગ્ન માત્ર બે વ્યક્તિનાં નથી થતાં પણ બે પરિવારનાં થાય છે. ખુબ સરસ વર્ણન કર્યું આપે.
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Thnq so much but I didn’t undrstnd the other language :p
May I know the meaning?
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Marriage is not only of 2 people, it is of their entire families. 2 families are gonna combine in marriage, so we need to see each and every matter of both the sides.
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Oh yes, I get that now ^_^
Well said !
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Thank you.
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That was absolutely touching! Overwhelming description ♡
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Thnq so much ❤ 😍
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Sanskriti, I found here two things Which touched me so deeply. First thing ,you are too good to be so loving. Your parents are blessed to have you as their daughter. Second thing you are matured enough to plan your future. Your parents will never have to regret about you.
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Oh my god ! Thnq so much ❤.
I’m glad you think so.
And I guess, my parents have the best daughter in the world ( Just Boasting about, glibly ), haha..
Thnx again.
Have a good day ♡☆
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same pinch..;)
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Hehhe … :*
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Agreed !
I am ready
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Hahaha, oh god!
Saari sharte manzoor ? LOL..
this was the funniest thing I read till now in the comments :p
Well I wish you agree to all this for the one who’ll be fortunate enough to marry you ^_^
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Hahahaahahah
Haan haan kyun …nahi
Jo apne parents se itni muhabbat karti ho …tou vo mere parents se bhi utney hi Adam ehatraam samman aur izzat se pesh ayegi ….
Really very touchy and sensiive writings
Thanks for sharing
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Thnq so much ❤
I’m pleased to know that you think so.
It’s my pleasure, thnq for stopping by;)
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You are most welcome
Dear!
Still no condition from my side.
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Hehehe… good to know.
You’re too good !
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Thanks alot !
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No need 🙂
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The successful marriage is not when you can live in peace with your wife,but when you can’t live in peace without her
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Yes, haha, omg, that is amazingly written ! Classic.
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If patience is something you have for me, then time is something I’ll always have for you.
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You write all these on your own ? ^_^
Too good it is.
Don’t waste it in a comment, go write a book of such awsm quotes
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In sha Allah (God Willing)
I will
All my qoutes r well preserved
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Good to hear!
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Small minds can’t comprehend big spirits. To be great you have to be willing to be mocked, hated & misunderstood
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Ahan… very right!
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True feelings expressed beautifully in words..lovely poem n heart touching
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Thnq so much ❤
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Love isn’t like a casserole that must be carefully served lest you run out before everyone is fed. Love is limitless. You can keep dishing it out and there will always be more. 🙂
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I completely agree to that! Well said 😀
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You will never understand what you your parents sacrificed for you until you have kids of your own.
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Han, correct…
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Beautiful 🙂 This has everything in it. The right of every daughter 🙂
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Thnq so much ❤ 😍
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The relationship between a mother & her child can’t match anything else in this world.
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Hmm, bilkul sahi kaha… nthng can match this love which is eternal.
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The heart of a mother is a deep abyss at the bottom of which you will always find forgiveness.
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Yes.. very well said.
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Excellent….claps…
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Thnq ^_^
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I don’t really comment on others blog, but this is amazing. :”)
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See, m so fortunate ^_^
Thnq so much ♡
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Umm, I don’t want to be cheesy and say in a different tone “Your parents are more fortunate”.
So I will just say Anytime. 🙂
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Whoa! Thnx a ton ♡ this made my day ^_^
Thnq… have a good day 🙂
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You say thankyou too many times.
I think I know why. You write so well, so you know there will be only compliments. So *thankyou thankyou*
This would be funny if the comment on your blog was not a compliment. Jk.
Have a nice life. 🙂
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😂 hahaha,
Well, I always remain short of words, hehe.
And thnq (firse) for making me laugh like an idiot.
You too have a happy life ^_^
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😂 hahaha,
Well, I always remain short of words, hehe.
And thnq (firse) for making me laugh like an idiot.
You too have a happy life ^_^
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🙂
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You know you wrote something personal when it makes you cry. Those tend to be the best writings. Great job SS! 🙂
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Thnq so much CG ^_^
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Exactly what a girl should think! you had given the words to innumerable thoughts of probably of each & every girl thinks in her life.. keep writing!! well done.. we need such kind of thoughts more on such platform. 🙂
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Thnq so much for appreciating my efforts and stopping by to read.
❤ 😍
Have a good day
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you too 🙂
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Don’t worry this is not the case in real.. We guys are having a heart too.. You will be fine
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Hehhe, relieved to know that.
Thnks for reading 🙂
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Of course, yes you would be happy…
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Hehe, Yo!
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😀😀
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And the day we will have people thinking in this fashion from both the sides, we will have become truly a social animal. Where we have learnt to accept our differences and yet decide to be together. Wonderful write up and since you have such a wonderful version, would you mind writing the same for a boy, where a girl comes in his life and what he expects or so. Just the dramatic mirror image of your poem 🙂 (*I can write but I want to see what you have got)
I like the way you think and express.
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Whoa! I was overjoyed just by seeing the size of this comment and when I read it, it gave me confidence that yes, I sometimes write beautifully, hehhe. Thnq so much for taking out time read and appreciate my work. ❤ I am so happy cz this is my ‘first’ ,u know request to write another poem, and of course, I will love to write it. You’ll see the other version this poem only after 29th March because my board exams are about to begin.
So thnq ❤
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wow – This is such beautiful sonata of melodies. Your words touched me and I want to play this poem on piano…
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Thnq so much ❤
Overwhelmed to know so ^_^
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well deserved…bravo:)
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Hehe.. thnx .
Cheers 😉
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Keep up the good work girl ,wonderful🙌
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Well, thnq so much ^_^
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Fabulous Sanskritiji.🙌🙌🙌🙌😘
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Thnq so much ^_^
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Terms & conditions well defined! :p
On a serious note, pretty sensitive write up. Just the way it needs to be! 🙂
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Whoa! Thnq so much😍
Have a great day 😉
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Thank you so much 🙂 Wish you the very same 😉
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Thnx a lot ❤
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You are welcome ☺
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Hehe, ^_^
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Great lines 🙂
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Thnq ^_^
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Wow gal ! You really put it up right 😍…
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Thnq so much ❤
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Impeccable….very impressive ….love the flare of ur words 🙂
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Pleased to know that. ♡♡
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🙂
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Already many people have appreciated this post & haven’t left words of appraisals ..
But still I want to say that I love the way you have written !
And best luck for your remaining exams 👍 😊
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Hehe… thnq so much for reading my posts and following my blog.
Glad you liked it.
Thnx a lot😍
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No need to say thanks .. You are a amazing writer & poet , So this blog deserves to be followed 😊
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Omg.
Whoa. It made my day ^_^
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A poem which leaves one breathless in such a beautiful way! I love it my sister!
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whoa! thnx a lot, brother. 😀
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This is really touching. Was close to tears. Isn’t that what we all hope for. To find a partner who is understanding. 😊
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Thnq so much ❤.
Yeah, these hopes…
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👍🏼😄
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Amazingly written… 🙂
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Thnq ^_^
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i think its ok to expect everything from each other.. thats what is marriage. have shared dream and with little adjustments here and there walk towards fullfuling your shared dreams
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Yes, right. I agree with you ^_^ 😉
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Thoughts are very beautiful…
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Thnq ❤ 😍
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This is so lovely Sanskriti.😍
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Thank you, Pratishtha ^_^
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Fantastic
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Thnq ❤
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