He let me out of my reverie
Wanted to say something to me.
Heart throbbing in my chest pocket,
I felt it’s the day he’ll claim me.
I made up a speech in my mind,
“You’re the most beautiful person
I ever came across,
I love you from my heart and soul,
I will stand by your side to cross
Every obstacle we confront in life.
No matter what we averse
Stands in our way,
We’ll fight against the world
In the end to be one.
I will never let you down,
You’ve smitten me enough
I promise you a forever
And wouldn’t dare to hurt you ever.
It’s just that I die for you
And all I know is I Love You.”
“Hey, still in your dreams?”,
He startled me again.
“I’m about to propose her,
Wish me luck and hope for the best.”
These words were a thunderclap to me,
It seemed my world shattered away.
My lungs found it difficult to inhale,
My heart wanted to escape this apocalypse
That his words resulted in.
It felt I’ll no longer be able to
Fight with the wind that pushed me down
On the ground.
It was as if I was pinned to the cross,
And no angel of God there to rescue me.
I was suffering, tormented I felt.
All I managed was to smile at him,
Smile that didn’t even touch my eyes.
My head was spinning,
Didn’t know what to do,
So I waved him a goodbye,
Trying to avoid any eye contact.
I felt dead, seeing him go
And taking away my broken heart
In his own chest.
OMG! Now even I feel heart-broken! Your words touched me too! 😢
Very well written Bro! ❤
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Our poems are relatable.
Thnq so much bro.❤
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☺☺☺
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That’s Beautiful……….Sanskriti ji.
‘दिल का क्या कसूर,
बेशाक़ टूट जाए सपने तो देखता ही रहेगा’
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Thnq so much, Sagar 😀
Hmm, bilkul sahi -.- Dil toh sahi mi pagl hi h.
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Welcome,
बेशक़ दिल तो पागल होता है ऊपर से हसीन हो तो और भी!!
संस्कृति जी
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Hehe.. haan. Great!
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जीवन में अगर किसी भी पल आप किसी को खुशी दे हँसा सकें तो समझो आपने बहुत कुछ कमा लिया,शुक्रिया संस्कृति जी!
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I agree with you. Needless, please.
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Thanks a lot.Sanskritiji.
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No thnkyou plz ^_^
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Okay But No Plz-Plz,
Sanskritiji.It’s Look Like’Koyi Danda-Sauta Sar Par Maar Raha Ho”
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😂 😂 😂 hahahhaha… okay 👍 :p
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tookaway the broken heart in his chest..?
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😂 ‘I gave him my heart long time ago which he now broke but I still couldn’t take away my heart from him cuz I love him’ , this is what it means.
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yeah dear.. I understood it, but my doubt was why can’t you take it back if he doesnt deserve it..?
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You know na dil toh pagal h. That’s it. I could’ve prevented a lot of heartbreaks if my heart weren’t a stubborn bitch.
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hmm… are you okay now..?
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I will be 😉
I’ve handled stuff worse than this, I’ll manage this,too :p
Thank you so much, Akhila ♡
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Strong girl .. you are ..
Such a heart touching poem !!
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Hehe, thnq so much. 😍
Yeah, I’m a rock, graphite, maybe diamond 😉
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Diamond will be the right choice of words .. Euphoniac Shining Diamond : Sans 😉 😇
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Hehehe, that was too good. Hehe, thnx a lot :p
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There she stood holding
an unbearable pain her
chest,that isn’t letting
her say the words to the
person she always wanted
to say.
Yes she was broken and
most of beautiful things are
broken ,but her heart wasn’t
a thing coz her heart held an
unconditional love for a
guy that let him have the
one he loved,letting her
love to remain in those
broken pieces that made
her what she is..:)
Such an beautiful poem this is,in fact read it twice..:)I have read some of your posts by now, but this one held a chord of something unbearable ..:)
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This was so beautifully written. Great work, seriously.
And thnq so very much for reading.❤ 😍 means a lot to me. ^_^
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It’s totally my pleasure reading your amazing work..:)
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Hehee… thnq again 😀
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🙂
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Pyaar vyaar dhoka hai
Paddle gets mauka his.
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Pyaar vyaar dhoka hai.
Padhle beta mauka hai
Ignore the firs comment. :”)
Autocorrect. -.-
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😂 yeah yeah, I do undrstnd the pain :p DAMN AUTOCORRECT.
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Years.
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What ?
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Year.
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😂 😂 😂 what is wrong with u ? 😛
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Autocorrect. -.-
Sorry.
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😂 😂 😂 😂 it’s okay,boy
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-.-
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😂
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Hahahaa…. yeah, abhi toh 12th khatam ki, aap padho, 12th hai :p
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-.-
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😂 Fine, I feel you. I had a rough year, I’m telling you. 😛
just work hard, IN THE END 😛
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In the end?
Coffee shop pe date? 😛
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😂 hahaha
I am ASKING you to study, dumb head, 12th h.
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Padhtaa him bhaii.
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😂 😂 Hu* u mean
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Haan. ._.
Agar love you likh du you samaj lena autocorrect. Jk.
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😂 hahhahaa… fine. Ladka aaj masti k mood mei h. :p
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Apna mood theek karlo. Ladke aate jaate rhenge. :”)
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😂 aryy, it’s just a poem. See, mera mood kisi b vjh se khrb hota h na toh mai love related poems hi likhti hu :p
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Ache okay.
Faltu mein home maare Maine.
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😂 😂 home run ?
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-.-
Sorry.
Joke I meant.
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😂 😂 Yeah yeah , I know. You’re kind of taking a chance ,isn’t it? hahahhahaha, studies se itni jldi bore hogye
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You mean trying to hit on you ?
Then let me tell you. I am not. I was just making you laugh because…. let it be. :))
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😂 😂 😂 😂 of course not,u bitch. I’m not wt you’re thinking right now.
Hahhaa… thnq so much for ur concern. I’m a weirdo, believe me. I love flattering games and so was playing with ya :p
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Bitch ?
Bhai mera wala aapki middle finger se bada hoga. So kripya iski bezti na kare.
And I know. 😛
That you’re weird. 🙂
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I’m that shameless at least, I don’t talk genitalia and all, for u to know :p so never bring that up again .
Hahhaa, good.
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Pehli baat I don’t get sarcasm.
So if you’re joking let me know pls. Varna main sach maanlunga even though woh jhooth hai.-.-
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Yei sach hai …
Hahha
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Ache sorry fir.
You missed ‘not’ likhna pichle waale comment mein. So main confuse ho gya. –..–
Sorryyy. :))
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😂 aryy, then I’m sorry :p
Maine dkha ni tha
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Ohhh. Okaay.
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Yo
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🙂
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Ripped from the heart,
Dripping the pain..
One of the tragically beautiful verses I’ve ever read.. Lost for anymore words..
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Wow, even this was mighty fine. Glad that u liked my work. Well, I loved this one. Thank you.
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Maybe I’m influenced by your words.. 😉
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Haha, oh no. You’re a great writer 😉
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That’s always the best and short way to boost my ego.. 😉
Thanks a lot for your kind words.. 🙂
I have never got around to thank you for being a regular follower of my blog.. Thanks for that too.. 🙂 😀
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Oh, I enjoy the works of other bloggers, it’s my pleasure completely, so no thnq 😉
Hehe, anddd, you’re funny too, hah!
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Do save the praises for later too.. 😉
Already suffering from leaping on cloud nine.. 😉 😛
And no thanks for noticing how funny I’m.. 😛 (Hope this is better than thank you! 😉 )
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😂 hahaha, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Get down, get down. People on earth are waiting for ur posts :p
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There are very few around here.. And if you are rushing me back to earth, how will you get a post on “Traveling: To cloud nine”.. 😉
(Actually I just realised it would be an awesome topic for a post.. Might use it soon.. 😉 )
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😂 yeah, see talking to me gave u an idea for a future post. It will rock, man ! Hahahhaha… stay up, analyse, get down and jolt it down then :p hahhahaa
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And will tag you specially on that post for sponsoring my trip to cloud nine.. 😀 😀 😀
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😂 hahaha. .. u must. :p
Even I’ll be popular then
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More than your current popularity?! I seriously doubt that.. 😉 Maybe it’s the other way around.. 😛
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😂 ohh noo noo, I’m still nothing. What I want to achieve is bigger …
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Sure, you would achieve.. The success is just lurking around the corner.. 😉
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Hmm, I hope ur wishes come true for me 😉
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So will your dreams.. 🙂
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The serious you:p
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Guess my alter reality took over for awhile.. 😛
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Hmm… it’s good to know the other side, too.
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Keep reading my posts and you could find lot more sides or just how unstable I am.. 😛 😉 😀
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😂 hahahhaa.. Proud of you my frnd. Hope you’re not split personality type, that’s it :p
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Hahahahahaha.. (The evil grin)
Of course I have a split personality just like every so-called-sane person loitering around… Coz no one could wear the same expression for so long and we do need a change of ourselves for maintaining our sanity.. 😛
Phew that was indeed one of my other realities and I am being threatened to not cut it from the comment.. 😐
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😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 , omg, I can’t stop laughing right now. Wht do I say now? Hahahha.. man, you’re too good.
Well, it’s better, you’re spared from a monotonous life, at least :p
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I forgot to tell you the curse that came along the Multiple personalities.. They all come out only to entertain others or pull my legs in front of others.. They are picky about when and where they appear and in general they leave me all alone with just the boring and too serious thinker..
I am so happy that they all graced your blog with their presence and making both of us laugh (nonetheless on a heart wrenching post :P) 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀
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Well, then I’m the lucky one. I’m honoured to have enjoyed allur personalities. Hahahaa, thnq so much sirs and sirs for visiting and entertaining me. Hahahhaha :p ❤
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(in an unusual display of a polite curtsey and a crisp rhythm) We all loved talking to you! And we would keep visiting you often!
Wow.. They must be really pleased talking to you as much as I am.. 😀 (My cheeks are almost hurting with my Cheshire cat grin..) Thanks dear.. ❤
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And I’m still unable to hold my laughter :p it was good knowing u all, keep visiting please :p hehhehee… i enjoyed ur company, guys :p
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(The wise one raises up and calls everyone for attention) Even though you guys are making someone laughing for real long, Please control yourself and stop cluttering the beautiful post with your nonsense talks. Hold them for another time and another post. Now be good and wish her good night.
(The creative one raises hands and asks to represent everyone else)
May you have the sweetest of dreams at the night and amazing achievements to cherish forever in the day dear.. Now please do go to sleep.. 🙂
(in chorus) Good night dear!
Hmm.. Seems I am being dragged away to the dreamland.. 😉 Will catch up with you soon on what happens there.. 😀 😉
Thanks for the lovely chat dear.. 🙂
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Can it not happen that I can keep all of you ? I literally loved the show. You’re a great script writer. Teach me please?
I want to thank you for completely changing my mood. It was great talking to u all. I will write more posts to talk to u guys often :p hehehh..
May u succeed and achieve whatever u wish . Have a great night with great dreams . Sleep well.
Will chat soon
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Me, a script writer?! Good joke.. 😉
It just sparked off with your comment as “The serious one” and you asking about multiple personalities.. 😉 😛
And I agree on the change of mood.. It is the same for me too.. Had a great hearty laugh with you.. 🙂 Thanks for being a nice audience.. 🙂 🙂 🙂
(Someone is nudging me to reply to the first line!) They say they will keep visiting you more often!
Catch you soon.. 🙂
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Hehehhee… it wasn’t a joke :p
Yeah, me too, this time will be cherished 😉
Hahahhahaha, I’ll be waiting :p 😉
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Oh my God, Sanskriti😍
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Hehhee… glad u liked it :p
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Poem to interesting hai hi, comments aur zyada interesting hain. Enjoyed both.
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😂 hahaha, chlo, good to know that :p
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Hehehe 😛
Hope you’re kicking fine Sanskriti.
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😂 oh yeah, m alive and kicking, and preventing a goal,too . Okay sry, PJ, I know :p
I hope you’re doing good as well 😉
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Hehehe lovely PJ 😛
Animals live too, being alive is not a big deal, Zinda ho to zinda nazar aana chaihiye. Always stay hale, hearty and Happy.
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Yeah, I agree.
You too stay happy and heartyyy and hale and all the h-words :p
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Thanks 🙂
Am always happy.
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Teach this to people,too,to be happy always 😉
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Teaching… no, but surely I try to convey it to all 🙂
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Ya, better than teaching, hehe 😛
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I have nominated you for the liedster award. To participate please go to my blog. The rules are under the liebster award post. I can’t wait to see who you nominate.
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Thanx a lot, Issac for nominating me for this award, but mine is an award free blog, so…
But thnq ❤ 😍
Glad that you think I deserve it ^_^
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You are very welcome.
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♡♡
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Gut wrenching! 😔
Hugs🌷
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Thank you 🙂
*hugs* :*
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You’re welcome
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