When you hold my hand
Your touch disarms me,
My body melts,
My mind goes numb,
My heart beats with the speed that of light.
My hormones rush inside my bloodstream, I’m pushed towards you by an unseen force.
A desperate urge to touch you ignites.
And my breath goes with you
As soon as you withdraw your hand from mine..
That was so captivating..dear!
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Thnx a lot dear ^_^
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Wow! I really like the movement toward and then away from each other. This poem holds a nice tension between dissolving and remaining whole or the way the invisible passion flows inward then out. I like the way you manage that movement. Very good Sanskriti. Excellent use of language to describe feelings, and that’s not easy to do! Good work!
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It feels great to see how you drank my writing and took time to appreciate it. Followers like you actually boost me up for writing more and more. Thank you very much, Paula . Thank you 😀 ♡ *hugs*
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Lovely poem Sanskriti! Such emotional poetry. Also it reminded me of an old song; which will probably remain stuck in my mind till morning! 😂
Abhi naa jao chhod kar, ke dil abhi bharaa nahi…………
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Oh.. ya, I know this song. Hehe… wow, see my writings can remind people of songs now . Hahaha. .. thank you so much, dear.
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😂 hahaha…. Cheers Sanskriti 😜👍👍
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Hehehee… cheers 😛 😉
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heart beating with the speed of light…nice
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Thank you , Akhila ♡♡
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Very intense.
Nicely done ☺
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Thank you so much ^_^
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You’re welcome ☺
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Simple yet touching, wonderful piece Sanskriti.
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Thanx a lot,dear ^_^
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Pleasure 🙂
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that two beautiful final lines are just heartbreaking! great job! 🙂
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Glad to know u liked it. Thank you ♡
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it is my pleasure! 🙂
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^_^ 😀
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hey!! after a long time I read ur poem.. and this poem made my heart inevitably delighted
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Hi.
Thank you so much ♡
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It’s been a long time I hadn’t experienced #Euphoniac poem …
This an amazing poem Sans …👍
Always pleasure reading your blog 🙂
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Hehheee… thank you Mahesh..
That’s so sweet of you ♡
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Lovely post =)
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Thank you, Anthony ^_^
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My pleasure 😉
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❤
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😘
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Eeee!! Romantic! 😍
I just love how your words never fail to touch my heart. Again beautiful piece of writing! 😇👍
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Aww.. thnq so much Chandu. And ur comments never fail to lighten up my mood. Love you ❤
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Love you too. ☺☺
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😍😍😘😘❤
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Bas bas 🙈😍😂
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Hahahha😆😜
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(Y)
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❤
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Nice👌👌👌
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Thank you😀
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Such beautiful thoughts👌😍
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Thank you😍
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You’re welcome ☺
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